The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The flowchart depicts all the essential steps in producing

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cane.

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, those processes will be divided into two crucial steps: producing

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juice and crystallizing it into

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. The whole production

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started with the manufacturing of

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juice.

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,

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canes are raised at approximately 12-18 months.

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, the

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cane is harvested by the farmers, unloaded by trucks, and cut into smaller pieces. Afterwards, the

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canes

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are crushed with modern technology to produce juice, creating a smooth texture. In the subsequent stage, before

processed

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into syrup, the resulting

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juices need to be purified with a limestone filter to separate unwanted substances.

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, the juices should be heated with an evaporator to produce

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syrup which

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the level of water.

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, a centrifuge is required to separate

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crystals from the syrup. After

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, the

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should be dried and cooled down. Eventually, sugars are ready to be packaged and distributed to markets.