Children brought up in families with less money are better prepared for life than those from wealthy families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, we can see children raised in families with fewer economic resources than other wealthy families, they are better prepared for life. I disagree with
this
essay. However
, I believe that PRIVATE discipline IS KEY FOR THE FUTURE OF CHILDREN.
Firstly
, having more economic resources you can afford better scholarship which is advanced in technology
, and also
actualised with the latest trend, such
as tablets or computers. for instance
, private schools, which are businesses are in constant competition with otherS, so they have to offer the latest trend in discipline, and also
they have to count on the best technology
to compete with the market. For
this
reason, children who can afford this
type of education are more benefited than those who cannot. As a result
of being in contact with the technology
at an early stage.
Secondly
, this
sector of the population that is
taking advantage of this
developed educative system is always one step forward having the access to more information which is key to developing knowledge and strong bases that will help that child in the future later on. Furthermore
, these schools are only affordable for the richest people, so indirectly they are creating a wealthy social circle which in the future will bring many business opportunities.
To conclude
, those who can afford this
high standard of education is way more benefit from many aspects, such
as being in contact with the latest technology
trends, and also
an actualized educative system. Additionally
, having access to more information is important to develop knowledge and create relationships for their futures.Submitted by gonzalofuentesvg on
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