The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.
The bar graph illustrates the global mobile phone
sales
among famous brands over the years, between 2009 and 2013.
Overall
, it can be seen that on the chart are represented five main companies, such
as Nokia, Apple and ZTE. The graph shows that there are significant differences among
the Change preposition
in
sales
of these brands.
Samsung and Apple increased steadly
over the years, the first achieved 450 Correct your spelling
steadily
steady
million
in 2013 and the second 150 million
. A big result if we look at the starting point of Apple which was less than 50 million
. Unfortunately, Nokia sales
dropped drammatically
after 2011 Correct your spelling
dramatically
at
250 Change preposition
to
million
, also
LG undergo a slightly
decrease. ZTE's Change the adverb
slight
sales
did not change a lot during the years and also
it also
recorded the lowest data in the most recent year. The peack
of Correct your spelling
peak
sales
is achieved by Samsung in 2013 at 45O million
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