Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs. How true is this statement? What influences people when they buy food? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The prices of the
food
were the most important factor Correct pronoun usage
that influenced
influenced
some Wrong verb form
influencing
people
while
choosing their meals. However
, other groups were interested in different parts of the food produced
process.
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food-produced
While
choosing food
, some people
cared about how much it cost more than how it had been produced. For those people
who were busy, such
as office workers and students, they
had no time to pay attention to the information Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
their Change preposition
about
food
. Their main purpose were
Change the verb form
was
getting
their stomachs full Change the verb form
to get
instead
of enjoy
the Change the verb form
enjoying
flavor
of their meals. Change the spelling
flavour
Thus
, to select
the Change the verb form
selecting
food
by its price was the fastest way for them to decide what to eat. Parents cared about prices as well since they had to take care of family members but the budget was limited. They needed to balance every expenses
and spend money wisely. Change to a singular noun
expense
Thus
, they tend to buy discounted food
to cut down on spending.
Besides
the price, there were other factors that influenced people
when they purchased food
. Environmentalists preferred to choose fruits and vegetables which were less wrapped and near to the place of origin. It was more eco-friendly since it reduced the amount of garbage and carbon footprint. For the group who cares about their health, they would like to pick the food
which did not add plenty of chemical ingredients in order to reduce the burden on body
. For those Add an article
the body
people
who enjoy eating, they knew that weather, altitude, quality
of soil and water,..., affected the taste of Correct word choice
and quality
agriculture
products. Replace the word
agricultural
Therefore
, the places where those
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that food
food
were grown were important to them.
In conclusion, busy people
and family
cared more about the prices of Fix the agreement mistake
families
the
Correct article usage
apply
food
. Nevertheless
, others also
focused on the process of the
Correct article usage
apply
food
production, whether it is harmful to people
's health or our environments
. Since it was essential to protect our Fix the agreement mistake
environment
environments
for the next Fix the agreement mistake
environment
generatoin
, it was a good idea to pick Correct your spelling
generation
those
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that food
food
which had been produced more eco-friendly.Submitted by m8121668 on
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