Many countries are experiencing population growth and need more homes.Some people think that new homes should be constructed in existing cities. Do you agree or disagree.

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Nowadays, there are more and more homeless
people
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in several cities
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overpopulation. It is thought that by building a lot of new
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,
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issue can be solved but I strongly disagree with
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statement because of these two main reasons; they almost do not make any sense,
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, the huge territory of a
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leads to various difficulties in both financial and ecological aspects. First and foremost,
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build overwhelming amounts of
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, the authority of a
city
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cannot put the final solution to
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problem. Of course, as soon as these planning
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have been created, the communities without homes reduce,
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, the members of these societies buy them and start to live
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,
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, the money of the government extends.
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,
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from poor parts of the country keep moving and filling the place,
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of previous ones.
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, Tashkent, the capital of Uzbekistan, is the largest
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in it and the local government
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been using
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mode since they came to their seats,
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,
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method is useless and I, as its citizen, may say that seeing
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attempt of the government
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form villages pique their interests in moving and
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there are more and more stray individuals here every year.
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, the crazy stretching of a
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can lead to terrible effects making it uglier and less appealing. In the place consisting of endless roads and highways brought about by making access to the centre of a
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, some dwellers have to drive tens of kilometres to get to their destinations.
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, they not only pollute the environment by using cars generating dioxide gas in the atmosphere but
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they waste their invaluable time and money on fuel and even late to their venue which is a more and more common disaster today.
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, the capital of China named Hongkong constituting an enormous number of
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so overpolluted that its population cannot just go out without wearing a mask without which they literally get sick breathing the air with poor quality. In conclusion, cities currently are facing a huge issue
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as being unable to undertake anything with the homeless public. A solution like adding new residential areas is often argued and looks quite adequate,
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, my personal sentiments are not on par with
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point because of the factors that these
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are unable to stop
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from moving there and they worse the appearance of the
city
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.
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