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The diagram illustrates the way in which

cocoa

beans

are harvested and how it is

then

used in the

process

of making

chocolate

. It is

noticable

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noticeable

notable

that the

process

of producing

chocolate

includes ten main steps, beginning with harvesting

cocoa

beans

and ending with making liquid

chocolate

.

In the

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first step in the

process

of

chocolate

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production begins with the extraction of white

cocoa

beans

from the ripe red pods, which grow directly from

cocoa

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a cocoa

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native to South America, Africa and Indonesia. Once collected, the white

cocoa

beans

will experience fermentation before sun drying and

then

packed into large bags ready to be transported to the factory by train or lorry. At the factory, the dried

beans

experience a roasting

process

at a temperature of about 350 degrees

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,

then

crushed and the outer shell removed.

Then

2 rollers in the machine press the inner parts, in

this

way liquid

chocolate

is produced.