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The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

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People
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 nowadays tend to copy each other's in a wide variety of
things
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 specifically in
fashion
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 and consumer goods
products
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. I strongly agree with the idea of humans to copy one another in these two fields because
at the end
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this
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 is what lead
people
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 to buy
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.
Firstly
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,
fashion
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 field is wide in its major with a lot of ideas from professional
people
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 so
this
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 led beginners to copy or take some ideas from these talented
people
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 so that they can succeed and form a good
product
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.
For example
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: in our society these days trends are really common so definitely there will be a lot of copying and similarity in clothing and some
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.
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, copying one another ideas can be the reason to convince a whole group of
people
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 to buy
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product
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also
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, if I went to the mall and saw a
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that is
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 spread everywhere, I would be so excited to buy and try
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product
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. But of course, not everyone succeeds in copying
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 from different
products
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 and
fashion
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.
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, some group of organizations do
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 on purpose, to sell their consumer goods and spread it everywhere around places.
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, copying one another may not always be the better option,
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 some
people
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 like to invent their own new idea to be special.
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 as: some clothing stores try their best to design new
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. In conclusion,
fashion
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 and several consumer goods
products
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 are literally all around us everywhere we go
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, its normal to see
people
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 copying each other's.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • conform
  • social norms
  • evolutionary psychology
  • survival
  • advertising
  • influencer marketing
  • celebrity endorsements
  • trends
  • followers
  • psychological comfort
  • social ostracism
  • mass production
  • high-end fashion
  • uniformity
  • cultural homogenization
  • globalization
  • media
  • spread
  • affordable
  • imitate
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