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The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city – London, and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013

The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city – London, and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013
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The
chart
 graph compares the amount of money
regular
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were
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expended in order to buy houses between
England
 and its capital city –
London
, and the bar
chart
 describes depicts the normal spending to purchase domiciles in
the
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other places of
England
 within the year 2013.
It is clear that
,
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London
has
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recorded the highest expenses
so as
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to purchase a residence during the mid-year,
while
 at that time
England
 had significantly lower costs.
In addition
, the South East has the largest
a
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house charges compared to distinct areas of
England
. As can you see from
chart
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, paying for
a dwellings
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 in
London
 was roughly £75000 higher than
England
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in England
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. Over the following eight years, there was a remarkable increase
about
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domicule
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domicile
expences
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expenses
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 by £400000 in
London
, twice as much as that
of
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costs in
England
. Looking at the
chart
 in more detail, the cost of purchasing
to
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a house South East higher in the North East. In South West attain
to
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£260000
about
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for
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the expence
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expence
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expense
 of a house, compared to North West and Midlands, taking up 200000 and 110000 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, england, london with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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