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The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city – London, and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013

The
chart
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 graph compares the amount of money
regular
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were
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expended in order to buy houses between
England
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 and its capital city –
London
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, and the bar
chart
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 describes depicts the normal spending to purchase domiciles in
the
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other places of
England
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 within the year 2013.
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London
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has
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recorded the highest expenses
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to purchase a residence during the mid-year,
while
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 at that time
England
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 had significantly lower costs.
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, the South East has the largest
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house charges compared to distinct areas of
England
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. As can you see from
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chart
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, paying for
a dwellings
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 in
London
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 was roughly £75000 higher than
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England
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in England
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. Over the following eight years, there was a remarkable increase
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domicule
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domicile
expences
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expenses
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 by £400000 in
London
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, twice as much as that
of
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costs in
England
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. Looking at the
chart
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 in more detail, the cost of purchasing
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a house South East higher in the North East. In South West attain
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£260000
about
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expence
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expense
 of a house, compared to North West and Midlands, taking up 200000 and 110000 respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, england, london with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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