The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided maps depict the present layout of the little
town
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centre, ISLIP, and how it is planned to develop in the future.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graph is that the
town
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is planning to make more modernised, with the construction of more facilities and residential areas.
Although
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some facilities are planned to remain in their position, there are plans to replace some structures. Looking at the maps. it can be clearly seen that there is a main
road
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running through the east-western
part
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of the
town
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centre.
This
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road
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has two side roads, one leads to the school in the southwest and the other one leads to a park in the southeast
part
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of the city.
While
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the main
road
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is to be a pedestrian walk, the two side roads are to be transformed into a dual carriageway, which extends to the countryside in the north
part
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of the
town
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. All the shops north of the main
road
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are to be demolished to make a new shopping centre, bus station and a car
part
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.
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, new housing is to be constructed on the northeast side of the main
road
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. In the south of the main
road
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, all the shops are to be unchanged;
however
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, the housing facilities are to be relocated. Some parts of the park are to be cleared to make a new residential facility.
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, there are plans to extend the school.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, road, part with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pedestrian-only zone
  • dual carriageway
  • current
  • surrounded by
  • propose
  • infrastructure
  • bus station
  • car park
  • residential housing
  • traffic flow
  • connectivity
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • development plans
  • main features
  • town center
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