Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email, recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest that you both learn this sport together

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Dear John, I got your email and
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to know that you are enjoying
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place.
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, in your
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you
have
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asked for my suggestion to select
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a new
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sport to learn. I am writing
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letter to let you know about
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. In my
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you should start
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table
tenis
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tennis
as it is
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an indoor
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game
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because
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is too hot in
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season.
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, you can feel comfortable
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and learn
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game
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.
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game
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is
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not only
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energy but
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gives learning about
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of mind and timing.
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there are only 2 clubs available in our town where
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sport is available. So, we should make registration in advance
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over there
. They are having weekly and monthly
both
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apply
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classes,
we
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can select
as per
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our
conveniency
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convenience
.
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, I would like to tell you that I am
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looking forward to
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new
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a new
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game
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I
have
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completed my graduation, I have not
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been involved
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in any sports
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lack
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of
friend
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overhere
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over here
. If you are joining it, do let me know, I would love to join it and have
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time to spend with you by learning. Do let me know what you are finalizing,
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accordingly
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we can reserve our seats with
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the club
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. see you soon, take care Warm regards, Jenny
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advice
  • recommend
  • suitable
  • learn
  • coach
  • lessons
  • tutorial videos
  • practice
  • tennis club
  • group
  • schedule
  • regularly
  • participants
  • tournaments
  • friendly matches
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