TASK-2 Being a celebrity-such as a famous film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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For example
, the desire of folks to get famous on social media like Instagram, Facebook and TikTok can prove this
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Secondaly
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