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Email Dear Cindy, Thank you for your email. Sorry, I haven’t written for so long, I was busy at school. Answering your questions, my attitude to extreme sports is very good. I think that people who do extreme sports
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strong and interesting. In my mind, I don’t think there should be any age limits. There are many types of extreme sports in Russia. One of the most popular types is professional skiing.
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mountain biking is very popular in Russia. That’s great that your
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is your
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