Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some
countries
choose to build specilised
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specialised
specialized
facilities
to train top athletes
in order to achieve international sports
rather than build sport
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sports
facilities
so everyone can use
. Correct pronoun usage
themuse
Although
this
idea some countries
followed to benifit
them Correct your spelling
benefit
competing
in international Change preposition
in competing
sports
by provide
top Change the verb form
providing
athletes
with high potential, it may decrease the number of athletic people
cause of short of sport
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sports
facilites
that can be used. Correct your spelling
facilities
This
essay will discuss both view
of building Change to a plural noun
views
facilties
for different Correct your spelling
facilities
perpuses
.
International Correct your spelling
purposes
sports
these days became high
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a high
proiatity
for some Correct your spelling
priority
countries
and one of the incomes to the country
economy. In Change noun form
country's
additon
, Correct your spelling
addition
by
building specialised Change preposition
apply
facilities
it
increases the chances of gain Correct pronoun usage
apply
athletes
that have a
great potential to compete in international Correct article usage
apply
tourments
. Correct your spelling
tournaments
For example
, the
Olympics each country with a top specialised facility have more chances to achieve and win the gold Change preposition
in the
medel
. Correct your spelling
medal
Also
, top famous athletes
may visit some countries
to use the facilities
in order to develop a specific skill. To conclude
, reasons
and examples mentioned in Correct article usage
the reasons
this
paragraph indicates
the positive development side.
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indicate
However
, for every positive side in life
there will be always a negative side. Add a comma
,life
People
in some countries
duo
to the lack of Correct your spelling
due
facilities
started to be more
lazy, sleepy, and gain more weight. Correct quantifier usage
apply
Less
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Fewer
sport
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sports
facilities
with no specialised factors or offers it
may Correct pronoun usage
apply
loss
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lose
people
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people's
intrest
in training and in Correct your spelling
interested
interest
sports
in general. Not only this
but also
athletes
people
may stop training if they see there is no positive development in the sport
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sports
facilities
. For example
, in Saudi Arabia
some small Add a comma
,Arabia
facilities
does
not have all the equipment Change the verb form
do
that is
required to train. For these reasons
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,reasons
people
will start to be unhealthy and sport
facility will lose their agents.
In conclusion, building specialised Change the noun form
sports
facilties
to train top Correct your spelling
facilities
athletes
may have its
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apply
benifits
for some Correct your spelling
benefits
countries
in reach
international Change the verb form
reaching
sports
but it may have its disadvatages
. Correct your spelling
disadvantages
Weather
to provide Correct your spelling
Whether
for
top Change preposition
apply
athletes
a
Correct article usage
apply
higly
unique Correct your spelling
highly
facilitles
to perform better in Correct your spelling
facilities
interantional
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international
sports
or build more sport
facility Change the noun form
sports
to
Change preposition
for
people
they can use. Finally
, having top athletes
in some countries
helped them to be more known.Submitted by a7mdzh on
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