Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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countries
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choose to build
specilised
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specialised
specialized
facilities
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to train top
athletes
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in order to achieve international
sports
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rather than build
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sport
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sports
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facilities
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so everyone can
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themuse
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.
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this
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idea some
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followed to
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benefit
them
competing
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in competing
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in international
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by
provide
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top
athletes
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with high potential, it may decrease the number of athletic
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cause of short of
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sport
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sports
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facilites
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facilities
that can be used.
This
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essay will discuss both
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of building
facilties
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facilities
for different
perpuses
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purposes
. International
sports
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these days became
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a high
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proiatity
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priority
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and one of the incomes to the
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country's
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economy. In
additon
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addition
,
by
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apply
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building specialised
facilities
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it
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apply
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increases the chances of gain
athletes
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that have
a
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apply
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great potential to compete in international
tourments
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tournaments
.
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,
the
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Olympics each country with a top specialised facility have more chances to achieve and win the gold
medel
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medal
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, top famous
athletes
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may visit some
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to use the
facilities
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in order to develop a specific skill.
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,
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the reasons
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paragraph
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the positive development side.
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, for every positive side in
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there will be always a negative side.
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in some
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duo
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to the lack of
facilities
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started to be
more
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lazy, sleepy, and gain more weight.
Less
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Fewer
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sport
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sports
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facilities
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with no specialised factors or offers
it
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apply
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may
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people
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people's
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intrest
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interested
interest
in training and in
sports
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in general. Not only
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but
also
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athletes
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people
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may stop training if they see there is no positive development in the
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sport
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sports
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facilities
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.
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, in Saudi
Arabia
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some small
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does
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not have all the equipment
that is
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required to train. For these
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people
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will start to be unhealthy and
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sport
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facility will lose their agents. In conclusion, building specialised
facilties
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facilities
to train top
athletes
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may have
its
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apply
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benifits
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benefits
for some
countries
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in
reach
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reaching
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international
sports
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but it may have its
disadvatages
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disadvantages
.
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to provide
for
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apply
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top
athletes
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a
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apply
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higly
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highly
unique
facilitles
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facilities
to perform better in
interantional
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international
sports
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or build more
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sport
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sports
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facility
to
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for
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people
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they can use.
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, having top
athletes
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in some
countries
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helped them to be more known.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • specialised facilities
  • train top athletes
  • international sports
  • boost
  • reputation
  • attract
  • sporting events
  • access
  • general public
  • inequality
  • opportunities
  • overemphasis
  • elite sports
  • neglect
  • grassroots development
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