Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

It is true that school

select

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selecting

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students

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a matter of great concern.

while

people argue that

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should choose

students

through to their academic level,

i

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concur that it is better to have

students

with different

abilities

studying together. To be specific,

students

study

with different

abilities

studying

togerther

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together

is better because

the

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lazy

students

can access

to

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the gifted

students

and

then

they can help

a

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support.

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example

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when

a

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apply

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lazy

students

who

study

with

a gifted

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gifted students

a gifted student

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students

can help

they

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them

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progress

and

then

they can be influenced

on

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by

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gifted

students

.

Moreover

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they can have more

knowledges

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knowledge

pieces of knowledge

bits of knowledge

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and solutions

how

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on how

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to

progress

and try hard to become

a

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great people like the deskmate who help them make a

progress

.So it is

a

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adequate

solutions

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solution

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to change the personality because they have

a great academic

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a great academic ability

great academic abilities

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abilities

but they are lazy persons

On the other hand

,

schoold

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schools

selects

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selecting

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students

according to

their academic

abilities

is a nice way but it is not

a

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best way because the knowledgeable

students

study

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studying

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together is very nice,

whereas

the lazy

students

study

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studying

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with the bad

students

is a bad way and they can fall rapidly

then

become a useless person.

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,

the

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apply

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gifted

students

can have more knowledge so that they can apply for more jobs and contribute to the

social

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such

as inventions or invest

to

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more projects and make their country

progress

sharply.

While

the bad

students

study

together and

they

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do not want to

study

and

then

drop out of school.

Further

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they become useless

person

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people

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,always depend on others and they can make

high

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a high

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rate of crime

such

as

rober

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robbery

,

mafia

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and mafia

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. In conclusion,

school

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the school

a school

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should select

students

with different

abilities

studying

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to study

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together to help people who

is

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are

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lazy and changed their personality

by

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through

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gifted

students