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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion

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One of the most widely discussed issues nowadays is
sport
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 complexes. It is undeniable that
sport
 has
beceome
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become
 an essential part of our life.
However
, there is no absolute agreement on whether
sport
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 facilities providing should be for only to
train
 top
athletes
 or for everyone.
Places
 like public gyms or fitness centres. A commonly held belief is that countries should provide
for
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only to
train
 top
sportsmans
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sportsmen
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, like
weight lifting
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weightlifting
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 or
athletes
. As evidence of
this
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,this
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 they point to ubiquitous and marvellous
athletes
 who
increase
sport
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the sport
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 level of all
country
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countries
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. The
quality
 of
country
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the country
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 is
significant
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a significant
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point
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of
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for
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persons
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people
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 who love
sport
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the sport
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.
Furthermore
,
olympic
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Olympic
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 medals and rewards are substantial for
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the sportsman
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sportsman
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sportsman's
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 own sake and for
country's
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the country's
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 popularity. It could be explained by the fact that rewards for
athletes
 can
also
increase
country's
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a country's
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communicate
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communication
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quality
 with other regions.
As a result
, it leads
to
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that upgrading
specilised
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specialised
places
especially
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,especially
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 for eminent persons can help produce a trust factor for
country
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a country
the country
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 that can help in future.
On the other hand
, some people believe that not only top training facilities should
provided
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be provided
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, via
places
 like
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a gym
the gym
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gym
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gyms
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 where every person can have a
train
 should provide too.
For example
, they may mention that default citizens and
sport
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sports
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 lovers want to
train
 and want increasing
quality
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the quality
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 of their
visit
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visits
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training
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to training
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 centres.
In addition
,
sport
 is the strong proof
for
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of
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 the tough health of people. The explanation lies in the fact that
sport
 is key for great health, by the way not only
popularised
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a popularised
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 person can be
master
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a master
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 of
sport
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the sport
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.
This
 type of status can be given
for
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to
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any one
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anyone
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, we
are
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do not know what
passerby
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passersby
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 in street can be in real. Maybe he can be a skilled boxer or
good
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a good
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 runner. Kind of
this
 people can
increase
country's
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the country's
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sport
quality
 too, not only top
atheletes
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athletes
.
Therefore
, providing
places
 that can be visited by everyone can help
two-times
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two times
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 better than only top
sportsman
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sportsmen
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. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account I would argue that not only
specilised
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specialised
places
 should provide
and
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an
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 upgrade. Even a default guy who can
increase
 his skills,
also
 can
increase
quality
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the quality
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 of
country
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the country
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 and maybe can be
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an olympic
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olympic
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Olympic
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 champion.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • specialised facilities
  • train top athletes
  • international sports
  • boost
  • reputation
  • attract
  • sporting events
  • access
  • general public
  • inequality
  • opportunities
  • overemphasis
  • elite sports
  • neglect
  • grassroots development
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