Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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cutting edge, masses are always surrounded by various types of

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in different places,

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as billboards,

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ads, radio, and pop-ups.

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are of the view that these

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have a negative impact on lives. In

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essay, I partially agree with

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aspect. On the positive side,

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tell the customers about their choices. In turn, consumers go for that product to benefit the company and the economy of the nation.

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, there are so many products in the market, and different types of taxes are implemented by the government. Spending on those products directly leads to economic advantages not only to the corporation but

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to the nation.

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, it creates a lot of job opportunities for skilled and creative

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, as

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opt for analysts, editors, and

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who are creative in making designs and

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, promotions play a pivotal role in today’s generation.

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, the downside of the ads can not be denied.

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, it creates a consumerism culture.

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, industries are influencing the earth’s environment negatively.

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, it is observed that

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, after seeing a new product with a better design and more features,

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apply

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replace it with an old one, which goes to the trash. Some trash includes specific cheap materials that can not be recycled and have adverse effects on the soil,

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the chemicals that industries dispose of in the rivers.

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, the negative side of the

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, like soil and water contamination, is the top problem. In conclusion,

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have drawbacks,

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as more through away culture, which

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pollutes the environment. In my opinion,

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trend brings a lot of advantages to the countries economically and socially.

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Provide a stronger position (fully agree/disagree) to reinforce your argument.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure a clear and consistent logical structure throughout the essay.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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288 words

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