The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian Cities.
The bar chart illustrates percentages
about
the Change preposition
of
residents
Change noun form
resident's
residents'
coffee
and tea
buying and drinking habits in five cities of
Australia in the Change preposition
in
last
four weeks.
Overall
, in all the cities except Adelaide
more Add a comma
,Adelaide
people
went to café for coffee
or tea
than to bought
instant Wrong verb form
buy
coffee
or fresh coffee
. Buying instant coffee
and going to café
for Correct article usage
a café
coffee
or tea
is
almost equally common in Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Adelaide
.
Most people
in Melbourne, Hobart, Sydney and Brisbane went to a café for coffee
or tea
in last
four weeks by approximately Correct article usage
the last
by
64, 63, 61 and 56 Change preposition
apply
percent
respectively Change the spelling
per cent
whereas
the proportion of going to café
for Correct article usage
a café
coffee
or tea
in Adelaide
was around 49%. These five cities also
had roughly half of the residents buying fresh coffee
.
Around 45% people
bought fresh Change preposition
of people
coffee
in Sydney and Melbourne while
approximately 35% residents
of Brisbane and Change preposition
of residents
Adelaide
did so. Hobart’s people
bought fresh coffee
almost as half of the percentage of people
as
went to a café for Correct word choice
apply
coffee
or tea
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