The diagrams below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram explains the way in which
oil
is meant to be used in perfume manufacturing.
Overall
, the process consists of ten steps, beginning with
water
heating and ending up with separating hydrolat from essential
oil
. First of all, a vessel with
water
is heated on fire stimulating evaporation.
Then
, the steam goes up and through the connecting
tube
and moves to the next section. There, gaseous
water
molecules face a mass of aromatic plants, heat it up and free
oil
molecules. In the following step, hot steam and
oil
vapour come to the condenser refilled with cold
water
by the lower
tube
. The gases are cooling
while
they are moving through the spiral
tube
, transforming into liquid and heating the
water
outside. Though, hot
water
lefts the container by the upper
tube
.
Finally
,
water
mixed with essential
oil
moves to the separator and undergoes a dividing process there, producing essential
oil
and aromatic
water
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, water, tube with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "moves" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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