Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays,

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the public

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considers that

science

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the science

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of

food

is the most important major

of

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students, but others believe that

school

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the school

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curriculum should include important subjects

such

as math,

physics

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and physics

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. Personally, I think that cooking

food

is not useful for major people, because they are going to choose more guaranteed jobs. In the paragraphs underneath,

this

essay shall see my thoughts about the topic.

To begin

with,

food

preparation is always

useful

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a useful

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skill,

that is

, it can be needed in the future.

For instance

, CZN Burak was just a child who helped his uncle in his restaurant,

then

he became one the most popular chef. He did not know that he could cook and there is nothing impossible.

Moreover

, it is

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an advantage

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advantage

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for girls in school, because they will marry and become

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a wife

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wife

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.

Therefore

, they need to cook for children.

As a result

, cooking is a great skill.

On the other hand

, students should know more important subjects to be ready for adult life.

Science

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The science

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of

food

will not be income for everyone, only some can cope with it. So, teenagers need to learn other majors. To give an example, these days, there are vacancies for

engineeringg

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engineering

, marketing and teaching,

accordingly

, adolescents should choose one of them.

Additionally

, people can dine out and not

to

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cook. If teenagers spent their time

on

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apply

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learnig

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learning

how to prepare, they would lose a lot of job opportunities.

As a result

, they will have

misunderstandable

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future without any prioritized professions.

Thus

, we should not give a main role

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cooking. In conclusion,

food

preparation is

good

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a good

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extra skill,

however

, we do not have to put it as our main major. In my mind, subjects like math

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more important and it is

priority

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a priority

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of

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teens.