The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
the chart depicts people's purchasing preferences and drinks customs
last
month in (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban, Adelaide
and Hobart) in Australia.
overall
, habitats in all cities -except Adelaide
- preferred going to a cafe for coffee
or tea. whilst, in ,Adelaide
the majority had bought instant coffee
. On the other hand
, buying fresh coffee
came last
on the list of preferences.
We can notice that more than 60% of people in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart went to coffee
to have drinks. Whistle, in Brisban 55% of the survey candidates choose to go to the coffee
out of other choices, but in ,Adelaide
less than forty per
cent of habitats choose that choice. Change preposition
apply
While
, instead
of that choice, Half of them went with the instant coffee
option.
We observe that having fresh coffee
was the last
in all cities. In Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart the percentage was about forty. Whereas
it was less than 35 % in Brisban and Adelaide
.Submitted by alasfar.maram on
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