The bar chart shows the relative electricity consumption and cost per year of various household devices. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer explaining the data and making comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the amount of electric energy usage and its cost per

year

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by different household devices. the values for power and their cost are given in

kWh

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/yr and dollars respectively.

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, the spa is the most costly and consumes the highest amount of electricity

whereas

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an Electric blanket is regarded as the cheapest using the least power among appliances. The consumption of power by the spa is around 2300

kWh

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year

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which costs around $200/

year

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while

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the Pool pump has the second most current usage at about 1500

kWh

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year

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charging $125/

year

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in addition

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, the refrigerator's current usage is more than 1000kWh/

year

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and its price is approximately $100/

year

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while

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studying the chart closely, it is seen that an electric blanket, microwave, television,dehumidifier and well pump uses electricity of less than 500kWh/

year

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and cost around $42,

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computer, aquarium,dishwasher, electric cooker, water bath heater, dryer, washing machine consume current of less than 1000

kWh

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year

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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, kwh with synonyms.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

155 words

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