It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children.

People who obtain how to behave properly at the very beginning of their

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easily fit into society rather than others. Acquiring behaviours’ outcomes, mostly affect attitudes that are associated with it;

however

,

punishment

for unacceptable ones could create a reverse effect if it is used unnecessarily or excessively

way

, so teaching the right is a long

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. Caregivers and tutors should focus on how can children acquire autonomous

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reasoning skills for their behaviours and consequences rather than immediately punishing unwanted behaviours.

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phenomenon is most likely to be misunderstood by everyone. 

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is simply referred to

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suppression of

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situation

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, it does not have to be a physical

one

.

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in

from

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emotional abuse to physical

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that damage

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children’s

life

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, because of its exploitable nature. People taking benefit from

to oppress

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child, who is different

than

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others, do not care

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children

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well-being.

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should be fair for anyone who is received,

that is

the critical line for

punishment

to torture.

Parents

and teachers do not

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of being aware of the penalty’s structure,

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is why it can aggravate the child’s future in a perennial

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. Research is shown kids who have been exposed the

punishment

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the abusive

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likely shrunken

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and not a functional

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. Caregivers and tutors, who are taught well, should be permitted to raise kids, regarding

punishment

usage.

Punishment

could be used in an effective

way

, for kids to make them understand their behaviours' consequences. If teachers or

parents

use it more than once and for nothing, a child could develop resilience for that

punishment

. Owing

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, someone who is in the authority should know its power on pupils, using different approaches for raising them in a good manner. A child who is in a learning phase can easily internalize others’

behavior

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and

this

knowledge could lead to

parents

or tutors

for

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being

a good role models

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to them. They can create an equal environment for childs’

process

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processes

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and give them comprehensible

punishment

for their

behaviors

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behaviours

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like repetitive and unmanageable conditions, they might use

time-out

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technic

that is

taking them out of the games or activities that children like. In conclusion, I’m an opponent of the

punishment

because of its notion that can be abused, and

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guardians

such

as

parents

of

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the tutor

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tutor

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tutors

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should be aware of the technics that are non-violence for

realization

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the realization

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of their actions whether its good or not.