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In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses. Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own style as the old house style in local areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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In modernizing world the
house
 is most important to
people
 and developing countries.,
Moreover
 it represents the national
culture
.someone is building their own
house
 which depends on the mind. It has some advantages and disadvantages. In
this
 ,paragraph we will discuss it. First of all, New development and building show the improvement of countries.
Due to
 the weather , a condition we need to bring some implements
house
.
People
 think their home amenities must have a lot of space
such
 as washing machine , bridge ,etc.so they like to build up their own style. The new
design
 reflects the Nation's modern
culture
 and it will attractive to tourists.example Singapore tourism, Most of the tourists are affected by the new designs of buildings and attractions. Even though, It has some disadvantages.In the future new generation do not know about their old living style.New
house
design
 does not represent the
culture
 even old
house
also
 shows exciting development. If they control the
design
people
 have a lot of space issues in their houses.Some cities have control of the building construction because of the old
culture
 represents by old construction
instead
 of the new building.
For example
, Near the
airport
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 they are like to build three or four storeys story apartments. It will dangerous to all the aviation paths. so that we can not build as we wish. In conclusion, the New modern
design
 is most important for national cultural improvement compared to the old style.It is
people
's life and their living atmosphere.The economy
also
 increases
due to
 tourism so we need to consider it.
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