Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

Nowadays people use
extremly
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extremely
high
amount
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of
plastic
packages and bottles, which causes bad effects
to
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the environment.
To begin
with, the majority of
plasctic
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plastic
bags, bottles and other packaging does not utilize the right way, and
this
leads to
an
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ocean
pollution. Not only
people
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through their garbage directly
to
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the water, but waste can be
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by rain from a road to
nearest
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river, and ends up in the
ocean
. When
plastic
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a plastic
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item drops into the
ocean
, it stays there literally forever, because
it
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can't be destroyed by water. But
unfortunatelly
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unfortunately
it can be eaten by
sea
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creature
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and causes them death. So,
plastic
in the
ocean
does a lot of damage to
the
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sea life.
However
,
by
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government's
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the government's
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and
individual's
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efforts problem of the
plastic
pollution can be solved. If governments will invest to separate
wasting
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,
plasti
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plastic
To sum up
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • ecosystems
  • wildlife
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • air pollution
  • strict regulations
  • plastic consumption
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • sustainable packaging
  • recycling facilities
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