Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values)

The provided line graph illustrates the acid
level
in the mouth which is created by consuming sweet foods specifically
sugar
and honey and the possibility of
tooth
decay because of
this
acid
level
. As is presented in the line graph, the higher the acid
level
the lower the
pH
value and a
pH
level
less than 5.5 is detrimental to the
tooth
and causes
tooth
decay. The given graph shows that the initial
pH
level
of our mouth is 7 which begins to fall after consuming sweet foods. When we eat sweet item like cane
sugar
, the
pH
level
drops to 3.5 after 5
minutes
and remain in danger
level
(below
pH
level
5.5) for more than 30
minutes
. Consuming fruit
sugar
drops the
pH
level
nearly to 4 and remains at danger
level
for about 20
minutes
. And
finally
, when we eat honey, the
pH
level
falls below 5 and it remains under risk
level
for about 13
minutes
.
Overall
, As the low
pH
level
means higher acidity and causes
tooth
decay, cane
sugar
among the mentioned three food items is the most harmful to our teeth.
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