You and a friend recently went on a holiday together. There is a problem with the photos you have taken during the holiday. Write a letter to your friend to ask for a particular shot. In your letter tell him/her about the problem with your photos say which photo you would like him/her to send you explain why you need this photo.

Dear John, I am writing to you to thank you for
great holiday that we spent together
month. It was an unforgettable experience, and I hope we will have some new opportunities to do something like
again. Unfortunately, there is something wrong with my camera's memory card, and I have a feeling, that some of my shots are missing. Do you remember the top of that mountain, where we met a couple of French tourists? They asked us to take a photo with them with the valley in the background, and
we asked them to do the same for us. Here is a problem: I cannot find the shot on the memory card, it has to be there
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because it is the only card I had there. I clearly recall, that the couple took the shots on both, my and your, cameras. I know that you took much more shots on your camera than I did on mine, and you usually do not sort and select them in short terms, but, could you, please, find some time to search through your photos and send
particular photo to me?
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