Some people believe that car-free days are effective ways to reduce air pollution. However, others argue that there are other ways that are more effective. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays,
pollution
is one of the main problems in the world,particularly air
pollution
since not only people
but also
animals are suffering from that issue. According to
some people
's opinion,instituting car-free
days
can be quite
effective way to reduce Change the article
quite an
a quite
air
pollution
while
,
others argue that there are other more effective Remove the comma
apply
methods
for that.In this
essay
I will discuss both points of view.
In order to decrease Add a comma
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air
pollution
some people
consider that they should begin car-free
days
since they think if people
do that at least once a week, the atmosphere will be less polluted and the noise also
declines.The more the government encourages this
,the more the air
and streets will be clean as well.Moreover
,the air
is so polluted today,you can see dust and toxic in some streets of countries.I think,
those can be useful and solve a problem a bit, but there may be other more efficient ways for that Remove the comma
apply
such
as planting a lot of trees in
the edges of streets.
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on
However
,there are other people
who consider car-free
days
cannot be productive,while
there are other useful methods
.These people
think that today we cannot stop using cars
because there may be different occasions such
as,
delivering somebody to the hospital immediately.In Remove the comma
apply
such
situations
Add a comma
,situations
people
have to use cars
that faster way of reaching to
the location.Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
,they think that the air
may be clean in some percentage for a day,yet then
it starts being polluted again in the next days
.In my opinion, we should use other methods
for tackling this
issue.The government should institute utilizing electro or solar power cars
because they pollute the air
less and are environmentally friendly.
In conclusion,although
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apply
car-free
days
are also
efficient
way to reduce Add an article
an efficient
air
pollution
.I think we should apply other methods
that are more efficient and convenient since we cannot refuse the
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apply
cars
even for a day.Submitted by moxinurabjalilova on
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