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nowadays there is a trend that the media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. some people think it is harmful to individuals and to the society. do u agree or disagree

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There is no doubt that the media has an essential role to play in the form of various
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 outlets. These days, it is believed that these agencies mostly consider focusing on ongoing issues and disasters
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 of progress. There are a few
people
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 who think
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 can have an adverse effect on society and its
people
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. In
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 essay, I will explain why I agree with
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 thinking and support my view with examples.
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, there is a possibility that a channel is motivated by a political agenda. Because a lot of
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 are easily influenced by propaganda or a piece of information which is biased, these channels focus on spreading data which can be of advantage to the opposition party.
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, there is a sense of negativity among
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 and they are unaware of the development happening around them.
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, research conducted by BBC revealed that around 75% of the
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 portals publish politically biased data days before the date of
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,
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 mediums aim to gain more views and ratings by publishing negative information.
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, a crime article is more likely to get
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's attention than an article describing recent
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 in laws and policies which are beneficial to the nation.
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 is an effective strategy used by
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 mediums to increase their TRP rating and
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 their public image. Doing
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 not only puts the person in a negative state of mind
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 but
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 forces them to doubt their country and its administration.
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 can lead to many citizens opting to migrate to other countries simultaneously putting the home country in crisis. In conclusion,
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 publishing
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 which is negative and critical in nature can make
people
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 aware of the current situation, I believe, it can have harmful effects on the citizens of the country.
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