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In some countries, it is possible for people to have variety of food that has been transported from all over the world. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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The phenomenon of purchasing
food
 from foreign countries has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as
people
's views on
this
 issue in question may be, I personally believe that the disadvantages of buying
food
 from other countries cannot be overcome by its benefits. Regarding the benefits of purchasing
food
 from
oversea
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, the most obvious advantage is that
people
 can eat
variety
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a variety
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food
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of food
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 that
come
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 from different nations, which in turn
provide
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provides
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 more options for each meal.
For instance
, in Hong Kong, most foods
are deliver
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 from other nations.
Therefore
, the
people
 who live
in
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there would able to eat different meals in different country styles.
As a result
, Hong Kong is a
well-know
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 city in the world as a
food
 city. Despite the aforementioned advantage, I still believe that it will bring us
a
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irreversible damage if our country
import
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 a huge amount of
food
 from other places. There are several drawbacks.
Beside
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 the increased cost and
food
 hygiene
issue
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issues
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 during
the
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transportation, the most significant drawback is that the local culture will be jeopardized. To illustrate,
traditational
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traditional
 foods will gradually vanish because
the
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 attractiveness of other national foods and
people
 prefer to consume cuisine in different styles for each meal, which is the reason why local
food
 will
be forgot
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, and our culture as well. The number of traditional restaurants continues to decrease in Hong Kong is evidence of
this
. Under
this
 line of thinking, it seems to me that our traditional cultures are too important to lose because of enjoying various flavours of
food
.
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