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There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making temperature higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperature rising?

#evidence #activities #temperature
Although
 industrial
production
 of
materials
are
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 developing civilization efficiently, there
is
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 some consequences of
such
 a massive amount of
production
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products
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such
 as climate change and global warming which results in an increased
temprature
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temperature
 over time.
This
 essay will discuss the main causes of temperature rising through
the
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man-made
materials
. It is certain that
,
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 electronic devices, which are helping people's daily life, need
to
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lots of raw
materials
 for their developing and serial
production
 states which leads to
depletion
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the depletion
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 of sources like
woods
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wood
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,
water
 and different metals. These actions
also
 result in deforestation in a short term. Deforestation and depletion of
water
 sources are both directly and indirectly related to increased
carbon
 footprint and eventually increase in temperature. One of the most important industrial
production
material
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materials
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 is plastic which is resistant to
biodegeneration
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degeneration
 in
a
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longterm
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. Because of the chemical structure of
the
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plastic, it has to
recycled
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 with technological processes.
This
 unsuccessful degeneration affects
water
 sources and natural
habitat
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habitats
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 badly. Another issue is
overconsumption
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the overconsumption
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 of raw
materials
 lead to
high
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a high
the high
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 level of
carbon based
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carbon-based
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 gases like
a
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carbon
 dioxide. High
level
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levels
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 of
carbon
 dioxide in the atmosphere
also
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 related to global warming. Processed foods
such
 as salami, pastrami or fast foods are great examples
for
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 overconsumption of
the
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raw
materials
.
This
 action has a poor impact on
environment
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the environment
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 and human health. In conclusion, industrial products (
such
 as electronic devices and processed foods) and overconsumption of raw
materials
such
 as wood,
water
 and metals result in
an
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increased temperature and deforestation which is directly related to global warming.
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  • Conclusion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global warming
  • climate change
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • greenhouse effect
  • pollution
  • emissions
  • combustion
  • degradation
  • erosion
  • urbanization
  • deforestation
  • industrial emissions
  • agricultural practices
  • urban development
  • residential areas
  • waste disposal
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