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The chart illustrates information about how regular physical activity was done by Australian males and females in the year 2010. The figures are given in percentages.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the bar chart that, most women exercised as compared to
men
.
Moreover
, it can be noted that most women did sports more as they grew older
while
men
 did less.
Men
 aged between 15 to 24 exercised a lot with approximately 52.8% in 2010 which was the highest in that year.
While
 for ladies, those who exercised mostly were between the ages of 35 to 64 . Those between 45 to 54 years were at the top with 53,3%. During the same year, the least number of males aged 35 to 44 years did physical activity with just 39.5 % which was about 12% less than that of females. Women 65 years and above exercised less in 2010 with just 47.1% which was a per cent higher than that of
men
. The ladies who went for physical activity surpassed gentlemen in five out of six age groups under review.
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