The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population age 65 and above in three countries.

The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population age 65 and above in three countries.
The table gives information about the prediction of the proportion of changes in the population aged 65 and above in Canada, Germany and the UK during three different times 1988, 2000 and 2030. It is important to note that Germany is at a higher rate in all periods. The percentage of revelation at an age of German people which stood at 20% in 1988 experienced an increase to 25% in 2000
moreover
, it will have reached 30% in 2030. In comparison, with Canada and UK the German has a significant rate and it is not comparable.
Likewise
, Canadian and British people age which were respectedly16% and 14% in 1988 faced a slight growth in 2000 to 21% and 15%.
Furthermore
, it is predicted in 2030 they will be 26% and 20% in comparison with each other the gap between these two groups will have been bigger
at the end
of
this
process. In the end, in these countries, the proportion of change is not magnificent.
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