The bar chart shows the numbers of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in three years and compaire with European everages.
The bar chart gives information about the
quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
cars
per thousand people in five regions of Europe certainly in the years of
2005, 2009 and 2015.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, the count of cars
significantly varies amidst
all the countries. As well, each Change preposition
among
country
except the third does not have a strong tendency and fluctuations are viewed. Also
, Country
4 maintains a constant car volume in the
all three Remove the article
apply
rime
periods.
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time
Second
and third union shows a small negative trend from 2009 to 2015. What is more, the first Correct article usage
The second
country
represents a huge positive change on
about 100 Change preposition
in
cars
from 2005 to 2009 and dramatic
negative reduction from 2009 to 2015. The third union is the one Correct article usage
a dramatic
who
has a strong negative tendency.
Correct pronoun usage
that
Then
, country
5 is the main host of cars
per 1000 people and it has a small decrement from 2005 to 2009 which turns to
Change preposition
into
vast
augmentation between 2009 and 2015. Correct article usage
a vast
Therefore
, the number of average cars
depends more from
the fifth sector because of the enormous car quantity maintained Change preposition
on
comparing
to other countries.Wrong verb form
compared
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