The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
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Given is a graph and bar chart, the first illustrates
tourists'
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numbers going out and into the
UK
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between 1979 and 1999,
whereas
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the second one displays the countries where the
UK
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's inhabitants attended in the
last
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year.
Overall
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, an increasing trend can be observed all over the period in both communities.
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, the bulk of people from the
UK
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preferred France and Spain to the rest of the countries. In the initial year, the amounts of visits abroad by
UK
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residents was slightly higher rather than those of visits to the
UK
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.
Although
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both of these raised steadily over the years, in the
last
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year, the visitors from the United Kingdom consisted of twice as many as those attending
this
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kingdom. Whilst tourists going to the
UK
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almost doubled from 10 to 20, the number of British visitors nearly quintupled. Spain and France were considerably more prominent states (roughly three times) where British people go in 1999. The three countries where people go were the USA, Greece and Turkey ranked respectively. Turkey
last
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in the row had about a million visitors as compared to the USA standing third.
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