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Many people who leaves school or hold a negative attitude towards learning. Discuss the problem and solution. Why does this happen? How to solve this problem?

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Education is
the
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 important aspect to have
brighter
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 future for every nation and children’s life.
However
, there is
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a discussion
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 about that bunch of individuals hold bad
attitude
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attitudes
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 towards their
study
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studies
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 when they complete school. There
are
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 some
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 behind it But few measures can be taken. I will discuss both of these in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are some causes
due to
that
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 people do not like to study.
Firstly
,
in
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these days children carry
lot
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 of
burden
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 on their shoulders. They have to give assignments, exams or homework even in one day sometimes. Even kids from primary
schools
 are
also
 doing projects and assignments.
Moreover
, all the time they just read or write
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 books.
This
 put
huge
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 impact on their mind
as well as
 on their body. In spite of
this
, there are some subjects or lessons that are not used
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 any
workplaces
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. But students have to learn them in school. To exemplify
this
, history
do
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 not have any use in future or at
workplace
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the workplace
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, where it would apply. But it is
mandatory
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 subject at
schools
. Despite
this
, there are some solutions for
this
. First of all,
schools
 and authorities should have to do some
alteration
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education
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 system. They should have to make education interesting. Teachers should not provide that much of
work load
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 of
assignment
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assignments
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on
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the student
a student
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student
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students
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. They should check the
student
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student's
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 capability before providing them
projects
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with projects
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. Adding to
this
, teachers should change their method of teaching as they can
also
 teach by videography. it
help
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 them to learn in an easy way.
To conclude
,
burden
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the burden
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 can be the main reason to leave school and it can be overcome by some steps taken by
schools
 or authorities.
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