The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the total of visitors who used three different types of airports for their travelling in New York City in six
years
during the period between 1995 and 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that the highest
number
of travellers used LaGuardia
airport
during the given
years
except in 1997,
whereas
the least
number
of visitors used New york
airport
in given
years
except in 1998 and 1999.
Firstly
, the
number
of travellers who used LaGuardia
airport
increased gradually from around 35 in 1995 to just under 70 in 2000,
whereas
it
also
increased steadily in New York
airport
from 15 to 40 during the period from 1995 to 1998, and
then
, it remained steady following next two
years
.
Secondly
, the
number
of visitors fluctuated in Johan Kennedy
airport
between 25 and 45 during
this
period.
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