Task 2 (Sample Answer): In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers, while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and Internet access. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In poor nations,

children

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in the countryside usually have problems accessing

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education. To solve

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problem, opinions usually vary on whether

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more

schools

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and

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recruit

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more

teachers

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or

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provide

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them with computers and

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connection.

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the technological approach seems a good idea, I believe that the provision of basic facilities is more practical in dealing with the issue. On the one hand, equipping classes with computers and

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Internet

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connection can certainly improve the situation.

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I believe that

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would help to increase school attendance by encouraging more

children

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to go to class. With these technological devices, they can enjoy watching interesting pictures and video clips;

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, classes are a great place not only to learn but

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to play.

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, the gap in the teaching and learning methods between rural and urban students can significantly be narrowed down. Thanks to the

Internet

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connection, schoolchildren in the countryside would have the same access to various information sources necessary for their study to broaden their knowledge as their peers in big cities.

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, I fully support the idea that rural

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should be offered

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more

schools

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and

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. They, especially those in remote areas, are in urgent need of a place to study rather than technological devices. One of the most common reasons for not going to and dropping out of school in these regions is the lack of

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basic infrastructure, or

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are too far from their homes as they have to hang

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onto

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cables to cross a river,

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on

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in

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Vietnamese television.

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,

teachers

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are more important than machines no matter how intelligent they are. Education is basically a human interaction process, in which

children

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are instructed and motivated by a real person, not any predetermined software. Though computers and

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access can be regarded as a possible

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to address

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problem, I am convinced that only can

schools

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and

teachers

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make profound changes. The lack of access to education in rural communities should be seen from its root before adding any branch.