The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
The bar chart compares consumer spending on
six
different items in Germany, Italy, France and Britain. It is clear that
British people
spent significantly more money than people
in the other three countries on all six
goods. Of the six
items, consumers spent the most money on photographic film. People
in Britain spent just over £170,000 on photographic film, which is the highest the
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By contrast
, Germans were the lowest overall
spenders, with roughly the same figures (just under £150,000) for each of the six
products. The figures for spending on toys were the same in both France and Italy, at nearly £160,000. However
, French people
spent more than Italians on photographic film and CDs, Italians paid out
more for personal stereos, tennis racquets and perfumes. The amount spent by French Change preposition
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people
on tennis racquets, around £145,000, is the lowest the figure is shown on the chart.Submitted by tjumagul67 on
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