the diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
the given diagram portrays the step of producing carbohydrates from
sugar
rodssugar rods. overall
, seven various phases should be done until the sugar
is ready and this
action advances from growing carbohydrate pole.
firstly
, the sugar
cane is grown for 12 to 18 months and then
, this
raw material is harvested by using humans and agricultural machines. in the following stage, harvested carbohydrate pole must be crushed and the juice of this
ingredient will be used in the next phase.
after those steps, the juice of sugar
cane has to be purified by utilizing a limestone filter. after the juice become purified, they need to be heated and become syrup by evaporating. next to that, the process of sorting carbohydrate crystals from syrup is about to start. in this
phrase, liquid from sugar
crystal is separated by centrifuge. moreover
, finally
, the sugar
is dried and cooled so, it is ready to use.Submitted by mahdiniknejad on
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