The bar charts below provide information about percentages of students who are proficient in foreign language in different countries.
The bar chart illustrates the data about percentages of
students
surrounding males and females who are proficient in a foreign languages
in several countries .
Correct the article-noun agreement
a foreign language
foreign languages
Overall
, the students
of Romania and India
rates were the highest , Followed by Russia
and Vietnam
and thirdly
China
and Thailand .India
experienced the most significant increase ,while
China
's rates were the lowest among the six countries .
On average , India
in approximately 68% of students
master
a foreign language.After that, Romania with a proportion of 65% with a decrease slightly compared with Change the verb form
masters
India
.After that , Vietnam
with a rate of 57% ,then
, Russia
44
% with a fall gradually comparing with Change preposition
at 44
Russia
and Lately , between Thailand and China
with a percentage of 32% which fluctuated , then
declined steadily.
In this
figure,the rates of students
in both Russia
and Vietnam
have reached a peak with the
abundance of females than males , followed by the rate Correct article usage
an
of
Change preposition
in
Vietnam
and Russia
which dropped considerably .Therefore
, in each of China
and Thailand
they attained a maximum of only 32% with the dominance of females.Add a comma
,Thailand
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