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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The maps illustrate the current plan for the
gym
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 of a college and its reconstruction plan for the future. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is readily apparent that the
gym
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 will witness dramatic change with regard to the construction of a new
pool
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,
sports
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 hall, dance studios, and other facilities.
According to
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 the first diagram which demonstrates the current version of the
sports
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 centre, a 25 metres
pool
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 is located in the middle of the place which is surrounded by the
gym
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 to the north, the seating area to the east, the reception to the south, and the changing room to the west of the centre.
Moreover
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,
two
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 outdoor courts are placed on
two
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 sides of the place. In the second map, the location of the previous
pool
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, changing room, reception, and seating area will remain the same.
However
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, the
gym
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 will be expanded towards the east and a
sports
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 hall will be built to the east of the seating place and to the south of the
gym
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.
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,
two
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 dance studios will be developed to the east of the new
sports
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 hall and
two
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 changing rooms will be constructed in the south corners of the centre. Ultimately, a new leisure
pool
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 will be located to the west of the previous changing room and facilities like a
sports
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 shop and a café will be opened
in
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 the
two
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 sides of the reception.
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