In some developing countries it is difficult to get good teachers to work in rural areas which can have a negative impact on the education of children in those rural communities. Why do you think good teachers do not want to work in rural areas in developing countries? What could be done to solve this problem?

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In many developing countries, survival has become very difficult in rural
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unavailability
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the unavailability
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of basic
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the
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of good teachers in educational institutions.
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a serious problem, measures can be taken to resolve
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issue. It seems that countryside
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of the state are deprived of many basic necessities of life.
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, people are not intended to spend their lives in
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regions. Experienced and qualified teachers are more interested to work in a well-reputed organization rather than teaching in an unrecognized school. The
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they could get in a metropolitan city are numerous as compared to that of villages.
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, salaries offered in
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areas
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are not up to their qualification and expectation. Another issue
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being faced is unequipped medical
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and hospitals.
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, in case of any
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everyone wishes to opt for the best professional hospital as it is a matter of life.
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, opportunities for career growth are
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very fewer.
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, the institutions in these regions are deprived of talented teachers, which is affecting the education level of students over there.
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,
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problem can be resolved by considering certain factors.
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, every experienced teacher should be placed in schools/colleges of rural
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for at least six months,
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provision
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the provision
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of extra
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they should be provided residence and medical
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.
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,
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rotation should be made mandatory for their future promotions, so that they might
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willingly agree
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posting.
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, their wages should be increased as per their requirements. In
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way, professionals would not deny
to work
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in these
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and the level of education can be improved there.
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unavailability
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the unavailability
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of experienced professionals in
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areas
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are
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causing serious educational issues for the younger generations there, and it should be dealt with to avoid consequences.

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