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IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.

IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.
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The given line graph
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 the number of visitors who visited Brighton attractions in England between 1980 and 2010.
Overall
 it can be clearly seen
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from the given graph that Art Gallery and
festival
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the festival
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was
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 downward
while
Povilion
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Pavilion
 and Pier
was
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 upward given the timeline. In the beginning, Art Gallery
travelers
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 approximately at 20%
then
 it rocketed in 1985 and was at about 38%.
Then
 there was a decrease in 1990 and it dropped by 2010 and became nearly 7%. Wheater Festival visitors was at about 30% in 1980.
Then
 it gradually decrease by 1995 and was at 25%
then
 it increased slowly and remained flat by 2010 was at 28%
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, Pavillon tourists
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 at 22%
then
 it gradually grew to 1985
then
 it plummeted by 1995 and hit a peak. It was noticeable that it twofold increase over the period.
Then
 it dropped to 2005 and
then
 fell gradually and was like 30% in 2010.Pier
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fluctuated by 2000 was approximately 10% like at the beginning
then
 it start gradually grew to 2010 and was nearly 22%
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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