The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues 

and admission prices to those venues in 2009. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 

make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart and the table show details about both the number of people who attended entertainment venues and the ticket price of those, in the year 2009. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it can be seen that the higher the admission cost, the less audience attended the event.
In addition
to
this
, the cheaper the entry fee the greater the attendance.
Also
, cinemas remained the most preferable entertainment activity.
To begin
with, less than 200 thousand individuals watched sports live,
whereas
more than five times up preferred to go to the cinema.
Accordingly
, the tickets from the latter cost $15 per person,
while
the former’s were five times more expensive, around 75 dollars excluding the basketball games, where tickets were priced at 34 dollars.
On the contrary
,
although
, Theme parks did not have much difference in admission fees, compared with sports, they had nearly 200000 more attendees than the gaming activities.
Moreover
, people opted for going to the cinema the most as they probably could not deny the fact that it was the cheapest venue (about $15 for one ticket and $55 for four people).
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