The graph below show how elderly people in Europe spent their free time between 1980 and 2010.

The graph illustrates how the elderly people in Europe spend their free time reading ,hiking , theatre , watching tv and surfing the internet between 1980 and 2010.

Overall

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and watching tv were the highest,followed by reading and surfing on the internet and in the

last

position the theatre .hiking experienced the most significant increase ,

whereas

, theatres were the lowest among the other leisure times . In

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figure, from 1980 , about 60% who watched TV , fluctuated before reaching a peak of 80%

then

it declined slightly

at the end

of 2010.

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they hiked and read were around 30%

then

it rose dramatically and clearly to attain the maximum between 60% and 80 % in 2010 .

Therefore

, the proportion of surfing on the internet was only around 5%

then

climbed quickly to reach 50% in 2010.

On the other hand

, the percentage of theatre fell constantly but slowly from 50% to 40% over

this

period .