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In many countries people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways,what are the causes and how can it be solved?

#countries #people #health
There is
increased
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 rate of
health
issue
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 that
are
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 related to
people
’s
lifestyle
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. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the several reasons
of
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this
 problem and some measures
can
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 be implemented to overcome
this
 issue. There are various causes of why
people
 are facing
health
 problems and the prominent factor is
sedentary
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a sedentary
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 lifestyle.
This
 is because when
people
 are not much active in their daily life or choose to sit for longer periods, they are at high risk of getting obese and
other
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 cardiovascular diseases. To illustrate, the American
health
 association have proved that 70
percent
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 of heart attack is linked to
the
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individual’s
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 who are working
while
 sitting.
Apart from
this
,
the
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diet is another factor. In
this
fast paced
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 life,
easy
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 available
and
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junk foods have become the first choice for
the
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people
 who are working extra miles away from their
home
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.
However
, certain effective actions could be taken to tackle
this
 menace.
Firstly
,
people
 must be encouraged to take part in
exercise
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the exercise
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.
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 is evident that
people
 are more active when they indulge themselves in any kind of exercise like jogging or walking.
For instance
, individuals who maintain their ideal body weight
according to
 their own BMI tend to have
less
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 disease conditions.
Secondly
, the public must read all the food contents before they purchase.
Hence
, they will come to know
about
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what and which ingredient is harmful
for
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 their
health
. In conclusion, numerous remedies can be posed in order to deal with the
health
 problems associated with unhealthy ways adopted by humans.
Submitted by Navneet Dhand on

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