The chart shows the differences population based on age

The chart shows the differences population based on age
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, it can be seen that there is an increasing trend which is shown by the
group
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of age 25-54, but 0-14 and 15-24 ages reveal a decreased style.
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, an older
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between 55-64 and 65 and over remains stable. The 25-54
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old rose gradually from 1990 to 2020. In the beginning year, in 1990, starts from 30% of the age population,
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it grew slowly to 35% in 2000. In the ten following
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, the trend has the same style under 40%.
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, the percentage is under 50%
at the end
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of the year.
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, for the younger
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, 15-24 ages and 0-14 ages, undergo a slight decrease. Starting from 25% in the first year, it was a slow drop of about 2% in the ten next
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.
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, it
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had a similar trend at 20% in 2010. After that, the style declined slightly under 20%.
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, the older
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, 53-64
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and 65 and over, indicated a remain stable manner

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Vocabulary: Replace the words group, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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