The chart below shows the changes that took places in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003 -2012
The line chart illustrates the number of
the
incident as the rate of Correct article usage
apply
crime
in three different cases
namely bulgary
, Correct your spelling
burglary
Bulgaria
bulgar
car
theft
, and robbery in the Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012. Overall
, the rate of bulgary
declined significantly replaced by Correct your spelling
burglary
biliary
bulgar
car
theft
where as robbery shows steady
trend.
Add an article
the steady
a steady
Bulgary
was the dominant crime
at the beginning of the period, Change preposition
with took
took
rates Wrong verb form
taking
over
3000 incidents reached its peak in 2004 which was 3800 Change preposition
of over
cases
as
the highest number of Change preposition
apply
crime
rates over the periods
, but it continue Fix the agreement mistake
period
fall
with approximately 1300 Add the particle
to fall
cases
in
the end of Change the preposition
at
period
. Add an article
the period
However
, in the
2007, its trend was Change the article
apply
change
where Wrong verb form
changed
car
theft
was higher than Change preposition
in bulgary
bulgary
with approximately 2100 and 1600 respectively.
With regards to the remaining two incidents, Correct your spelling
Bulgaria
bulgar
burglary
car
theft
was a steady level of crime
from 2003 to 2004 and got reduced in next
5 years from approximately 2700 up to 2250. The number Correct article usage
the next
then
increased to 2700 in 2012. Robbery reached 900 cases
in 2005 then
continue Correct word choice
and then
become
stable Fix the infinitive
to become
untill
the end of Correct your spelling
until
period
.Add an article
the period
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