■ Write a letter to a sports club. Tell them you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about this. Write ▪What exactly wrong with their service ▪What happened after you complained the first time ▪What you want the club to do after your letter

Dear Sir, I am writing
letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the sports club. To start with, the facilities here are not up to the standards as some of the equipment is damaged,
others have parts missing.
, there is no discipline,
due to
the fact that any non-member can access the area. As a matter of fact, I had written to the vice president about the issue and he had assured me that things would be under control. But, It has been more than 2 months and there is no change in the condition. I hope the matter is taken seriously and here are a few suggestions that might help.
, Only members should be allowed.
, the equipment should be replaced as
might affect the performance. I would
be extremely thank
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full if these problems are handled immediately. Best Regards, Ranjan
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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