■ Write a letter to a sports club. Tell them you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about this. Write ▪What exactly wrong with their service ▪What happened after you complained the first time ▪What you want the club to do after your letter

#sports #club #service #▪what #first #time

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the sports club. To start with, the facilities here are not up to the standards as some of the equipment is damaged,

while

others have parts missing.

Moreover

, there is no discipline,

due to

the fact that any non-member can access the area. As a matter of fact, I had written to the vice president about the issue and he had assured me that things would be under control. But, It has been more than 2 months and there is no change in the condition. I hope the matter is taken seriously and here are a few suggestions that might help.

Firstly

, Only members should be allowed.

Secondly

, the equipment should be replaced as

this

might affect the performance. I would

be extremely thank

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full if these problems are handled immediately. Best Regards, Ranjan

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

146 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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■ Write a letter to a sports club. Tell them you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about this. Write ▪What exactly wrong with their service ▪What happened after you complained the first time ▪What you want the club to do after your letter

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