ncreasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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congestion and Industrialisation is becoming a problem
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developing countries.
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, In order to control
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and
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I don't think that rising the prices of the fossil fuels
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will make much difference. Because
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there are some
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who think rising
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petrol prices can reduce
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and
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problems
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problems
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and increasing
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.Of all the contributing factors, Increasing Globalisation and Industrialisation
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the economy grow by investing to build companies and give job opportunities so, increasing their need to commute and creating a problem.
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who commute to work and school children are the main reason
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congestion because they commute daily at the same time individually with their own transport creating a rush hour in the
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. Global warming is
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increased
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of greenhouse gases.The main factors for
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are increased smoke emission by vehicles and fumes emitted by factories and industries into the air .
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. Developing special road lanes for buses and cars could help. Government should impose strict laws regarding
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rules and
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problems
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.
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should go together for workplaces .
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in UK government has been strict against
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in congestion
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who violate the rule.
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pollution
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problems
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government should look after the waste material companies
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. They should exhibit strict rules to companies legally.
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of plastic should be banned. They should encourage RRR
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campaigns
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to reduce, recycle,
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.We should use
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packaged products. To Summarise, rather than increasing the prices
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better
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changes in the ways of transport and commuting and
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regarding
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of fossil fuels and plastic usage leading to
pollution
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problems
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. Because it not only contributes to
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Environment but
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human
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well being
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Discourage
  • Incentivize
  • Alternative energy
  • Public transportation
  • Lower-income
  • Carpool
  • Ride-sharing
  • Congestion
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrian-friendly
  • Tax incentives
  • Electric and hybrid vehicles
  • Emissions standards
  • Cleaner vehicles
  • Congestion charges
  • Bicycle lanes
  • Sustainable
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